MOrgan's Rotation respose #3

You obviously know what you're doing. just go a little slower and be more carful. I'm sorry to say this but I didn't comprehend much of your articles, thats probably because I don't speak basket ball. You should consider just writting a short entry on the rules of the game or explaining what the game is all about.

Phoebe's Responce #3

Wow Everett that was really impressive, it's obvious you really know how the game works. The only thing I would suggest is read back over that sheet with how to do citations, because yours are pretty wrong. It looks like you have most of the information, but it's all in a different order and one of the dates is missing.
Other than that, great job! I enjoyed reading your rants(: Keep it up!

Kelsey Schwarz- Response to 4,5,6

You're a basketball fanatic. (: You're doing a good job with the articles that you've been doing and giving us good information and statistics about the games. I like how you get really into it and know a lot about the team, I think you'll benefit a lot from that. It'd be cool to maybe branch off and look at a different aspect of the team. You could maybe find an article on their coach and what he has to say, or his life even. Or you could find something on the outside lives of professional basketball players. In general, you're doing a good job.